What not to do...

Just been flicking through the book 'Ideas for the Animated Short - Finding and Building Stories' and come across this:

Funny that the day after the session with my supervisors i should come across this. What i shouldn't do i did! Anyway, im going to film myself again but this time with the focus of internal monologue and with a much reserved tone, focusing on how i feel inside rather than outside. We'll see how this goes!